This is amazing. It was the first time I read it, but I'm just dying to know if they make it and how they make it or not.
Jaejoong is, again, the one that makes the situation escalate out of control, and I love that. I'm a fan of superpowers be it in anime/manga, comics or fantasy/science fiction books/movies. I even started a fic with them having powers that I never got around to finish LOL
Seriously. This was incredible. I loved it. Every word. It feels way shorter than the actual word count because I think I've been holding my breath throughout the fic. Since that "but Jaejoong did" at the very beginning I knew something fishy was going on. And the scene in which Jaejoong takes their trackers out breaks my heart. I don't think there's anything that could hurt him more deeply than causing pain to the other four.
Your Yunho, as always, is incredibly sound. He is Leader-shii, the one leading the Rising Gods of the East. Being inside his mind was a pleasure.
Yoochun, Changmin and Junsu don't fall behind. They're great too. Their interactions are brilliant, from Changmin admiring Jaejoong and taking care of him to Junsu's and Yoochun's fight after staying physically close to each other all the time.
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Date: 2012-01-09 08:06 pm (UTC)This is amazing. It was the first time I read it, but I'm just dying to know if they make it and how they make it or not.
Jaejoong is, again, the one that makes the situation escalate out of control, and I love that. I'm a fan of superpowers be it in anime/manga, comics or fantasy/science fiction books/movies.
I even started a fic with them having powers that I never got around to finish LOLSeriously. This was incredible. I loved it. Every word. It feels way shorter than the actual word count because I think I've been holding my breath throughout the fic. Since that "but Jaejoong did" at the very beginning I knew something fishy was going on. And the scene in which Jaejoong takes their trackers out breaks my heart. I don't think there's anything that could hurt him more deeply than causing pain to the other four.
Your Yunho, as always, is incredibly sound. He is Leader-shii, the one leading the Rising Gods of the East. Being inside his mind was a pleasure.
Yoochun, Changmin and Junsu don't fall behind. They're great too. Their interactions are brilliant, from Changmin admiring Jaejoong and taking care of him to Junsu's and Yoochun's fight after staying physically close to each other all the time.
I love this so much... ♥♥♥♥♥
Thank you for sharing!! ^^